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DoshDosh on Megite

Its vs. It’s

Thinking to Myself

Three Essential Steps to Great Blog Posts

Keeping Track of Your Ideas

Write Outstanding Titles and Openings for Your Blog

You’ve probably read about why you should write better titles and openings, but do you know how to do it? Do you know what makes an opening exceptional, and can you spot a weak title? Spending some time revising your titles and openings can strengthen your writing, improve your blog’s SEO and traffic, and help you retain readers.

Improve Your Titles

You’ll want to achieve at least two things when writing your blog titles. First, never forget that you’re writing for real people. Your titles should clearly describe the article content and at the same time grab your reader’s attention. A good title can convince a potential visitor to click through to your site; a poorly worded one can send traffic to your competitors instead.

You also need to think about search engines and SEO when writing your titles. After all, if potential readers can’t find you through search engines, then no amount of terrific writing will help. Because search engines pay particular attention to titles, you should take the time to make sure yours do all they can to bring traffic to your site.

Is it possible to write titles that are both reader- and search engine-friendly? Absolutely.

Include keywords in your title

Because search engines make heavy use of the title, you should include keywords in your post title. When search engines can accurately index your site, readers can more readily find you.

To help you write your titles, think of all the keywords (or search terms) that someone might use to find your post or posts like yours in a search engine. Let’s say you’re writing about how you lost 20 pounds by giving up junk food. Some of your keywords might be: diet, weight loss, junk food, and nutrition. Here are some possible titles.

  • How I lost weight by giving up junk food
  • Give up junk food and lose 20 pounds
  • Eat Right. Lose Weight.
  • How I gave up junk food and dropped 20 pounds
  • Lose weight without dieting

I’m sure you get the idea so far. Here comes the fun part. Take each of the titles you’ve come up with and copy and paste it into Google. What does the search return? For example, a search on my first title, How I lost weight by giving up junk food, returns tons of links to sites that tell how to lose weight while eating all the junk food I want. That title will probably work, but take a look at the third entry, Eat Right. Lose Weight. At first glance, that sounds pretty good. However, you get much more general results when you use that as a search phrase. I would rethink that one. Evaluate each title to see if you’re getting other posts that are somewhat similar to yours. If not, you probably want to tweak the title and try again.

Be intriguing

That’s intriguing, not mysterious. Many people read dozens, even hundreds, of RSS feeds daily. It’s unlikely that readers will take a second look at your post unless they know that you’re writing about something they’re interested in. Don’t try to be cute or witty with your titles. You’re better off (and so are your readers) with simple blog posts that get the point across.

That doesn’t mean, however, that your post titles have to be dull. You can be clear and intriguing at the same time.

Here are some examples of good titles. The title is clear, but not boring:

Offer Benefits
Another technique is to mention what benefit your reader will receive from the post, or from following the advice in the post. Whether she’ll have more money, be more attractive, or have more free time, try to add something to the title to indicate how the reader will benefit. To put it bluntly, readers want to know what’s in it for them.

Shorter is Better

Although you can sometimes be successful with long post titles, in general, shorter tends to be better. For one thing, many search engines and RSS readers will truncate long titles, so your meaning may not be clear if that happens.Longer titles can often simply be just too wordy. Take some time and rework them to tighten them up as much as you can.
For more pointers on writing great titles, visit these sites.

Improve Your Openings

Brian Clark of Copyblogger has a terrific post covering just this topic. As an added bonus, his title, 5 Simple Ways to Open Your Blog Post With a Bang is great as well. I won’t rehash what he’s said, but I will offer some tips of my own that I’ve found to work well.

Solve a problem

If you can show your reader how to solve a problem she has, then she’s likely to keep reading. Whether you’re explaining how to get rid of clutter, eliminate debt, or knit a sweater, readers will appreciate the time you spend helping them solve a problem.

How to Use Valuable Content to Attract Opportunity is a good example of a post that opens by offering to solve a problem. Here is an excerpt:

Are you struggling to attract prospects? Do you need to increase the size of your opt-in email-marketing list? How can you stand out in a sea of noise?

 

Visit Lifehacker to read some well-done how-to posts on a variety of topics and gain some valuable insight as to how it’s done.

Encourage Curiosity

Readers are curious; otherwise, they wouldn’t bother reading your blog, or anyone else’s for that matter. Provide your reader with a teaser in the opening to encourage further reading. Here are a few examples:

  • Did you know the average American owes thousands in credit card debt?
  • Virtually any family can live on one income.
  • Your house can go from squalor to spotless in only a few minutes a day.

Tell a Story, or Invite Your Readers to

Everyone loves a good story, and blog readers are no different. Open your post with some storytelling, or encourage your reader to join in the story with you.

  • Do you remember the first time you spent the night away from home?
  • When I first walked out on the baseball field, I was almost too excited to play, but I never finished the season.
  • Finishing high school was one of the worst mistakes I’ve ever made.

The first opening encourages your readers to step into the story with you by remembering something from their childhood. Most people will be intrigued to find out how their experience matches up to yours. The others set up a mystery of sorts, and who doesn’t love a mystery? Your readers will stay glued to their screens to find out what happens next.

Techniques to Avoid

Don’t be misleading

Many sites use misleading titles and openings to drive traffic to the site with little thought for the reader experience. You’ve probably run across a few of these yourself. Usually, they’re covered with ads, and it’s obvious that the blogger is more interested in generating traffic for ad revenue than providing content. It’s useless to try to attract people to your posts unless they’re likely to be interested in them; otherwise, they’ll click off your site as quickly as they clicked on to it.

Don’t skip the opening

Some people hate to write openings, so they tend to skip or minimize them. While the occasional post can still be good with no opening, most posts will benefit from a good hook. If you’re tempted to skip your hook, then go ahead and write the rest of the post. Often you’ll hit on a good idea for an opening when working on the rest of the article.

Revise!

You may think that you’ve put together a great title and killer opening, but don’t hit the “publish” button just yet. Let the post rest for a while, a day or so if you can. The time will give you a little perspective on your writing, which will enable you to spot problems before the post becomes public. You’d be surprised, the post you thought was terrific yesterday can become no better than ho-hum overnight.

Welcome to Daily Blog Tips Readers

Hello to everyone coming from Daily Blog Tips for the contest entries. While you’re here, please subscribe to my RSS feed; I’d love to have you.

My entry is here.

My votes for top posts is here.

I’ll also have a post tomorrow on writing better titles and openings for blog posts. Current readers, I’ll be putting up the character building worksheets within the next day or two, so keep an eye out for those.

Contest Entry: Daily Blog Tips

I entered one of my blog posts in a contest over at Daily Blog Tips.

You can’t vote unless you entered, but the articles are definitely worth taking a look at. You may even find another blog or too to add to your RSS reader.

When I was reading (or skimming) the other entries, I was looking for content that was well-written and that taught me something or approached the topic in a unique way. My votes for best entries are, in order…

3 Reasons why Comment Relish is not Good for Your Blog I didn’t even know what comment relish was, but Vijay gives a good explanation on why not to use it, and what’s the better alternative. I agree!

3 Reasons why I suck as a Blogger Ben gives an interesting take on blogging, considering the abundance of sites that help you find more and more readers. A refreshing viewpoint!

3 Good Blog Habits to Get Huge Traffic for Your Blog Amey has some good tips for increasing traffic, and they’re not just the same old ones either.

3 Ways to Have a Luxurious Hawaii Vacation on the cheap Sheila gives some good tips for making a Hawaii trip both fun and affordable.

How to Sell Your Blog in 3 Easy Steps I’m not in the market to sell, but if you’re thinking about it, Ahmed has some useful advice.


Three essential steps to great blog posts

You’ve heard the mantra: content is king. If there’s one thing you must do to have a profitable, high-traffic blog, it’s provide excellent content. How do you ensure that you’re doing that?

1. Provide Details

Whether you’re writing a recipe or telling someone how to start a home business, give plenty of details. People want to know exactly how they can do what you’ve done, and they’ll appreciate the time and effort you put into the post.

  • What tools do you need to start with? Whether software or power tools, knowing that you have everything you need before you begin is essential.
  • How long does it take? If I’m starting a blogging business, I’d like to know if it’s going to take me six months or six years to get it off the ground.
  • What skills does a person need to accomplish the goal? Will your readers need to be able to use a table saw, write HTML, or operate a sewing machine with some degree of skill? Tell your readers the minimum skills they’ll need.
  • Tell exactly how you did it. Don’t write about increasing your traffic unless you tell how you increased it.
  • Talk about what works, and what doesn’t. If you tried something and it failed miserably, write about it. Your readers may be able to avoid your mistake. At the very least, they won’t feel so foolish when they make big blunders of their own.

2. Revise

No matter how tempting, don’t hit the “Publish” button without first taking time to re-read and revise what you’ve written. Stephen King once said, “Only God gets things right the first time,” and there’s a lot of truth to that. If at all possible, let the post “rest” overnight or even a day or two before going back to it. The fresh perspective you get will help you spot problems.

First Pass

On your first revision pass, look for problems with the overall message. Asking yourself these questions may help:

  • What is the point you’re trying to make with the post? Is it clear?
  • Do you provide enough examples to make your point or support your position? This is a good time to show your work to someone else and ask if they can follow it. If they have questions, you can bet your blog readers will too.
  • Do you contradict yourself?
  • Do you come off sounding angry, defensive, or negative? Is that how you really want to seem?
  • If a new reader to your blog read this post, would they understand it?
  • How is the organization? Do ideas move smoothly from one to the next in a logical progression?
  • Do you have a solid opening? Remember, this is the “hook” that will keep people reading. Or not.
  • Do you have an effective conclusion? Do you wind things up for the reader, point them to other sources, or provide some sense of completeness? Don’t leave your readers dangling.

Second Pass

Once your ideas are on paper — or, more probably, on screen — in an organized way, it’s time to get a little more serious. Begin looking at the overall structure of your post.

  • Do you use headings, bold, underline, etc. to break up the text and make it easier to read?
  • Are paragraphs relatively short? Remember, longer blocks of text are tough to read on the computer.
  • Do you stick to one idea per paragraph?
  • Look at individual sentences. Are they well thought out? Do you vary your sentence length?
  • Look at your word choices. Do you repeat words a lot? Using the same words over and over (like I just did) can distract a reader.

Final Pass

On your last revision pass, you’ll catch any errors that you’ve missed up to this point. Although some would argue that blogging is a more relaxed form of communication and doesn’t require such careful proofreading, I disagree. Any time I read a post with grammatical mistakes, spelling errors, etc., I notice, and others do too. Don’t you owe it to yourself to put your work in the best light possible?

  • Check grammar. Some typical mistakes are subject-verb agreement, incomplete sentences, and misuse of the apostrophe.
  • Check spelling, and don’t trust the spell checker software to catch all your mistakes.
  • Look for commonly misused words, like their/there for example. It’s and its are also commonly confused.
  • Check punctuation. This is a great time to make sure you don’t overuse exclamation marks! (wink)

3. Provide Links

Link to other posts on your blog that cover the same topic. Your readers are eager for information, and they’ll appreciate the fact that you took the time to point it out to them. You’ll benefit from having readers delve deeper into your blog.

Blogging is a conversation between you and your readers, AND it’s a conversation between you and other bloggers. If someone else has written something similar, then link to it. Link to it even if their opinion differs. Your readers will appreciate the extra sources of information, and your open acknowledgment of other viewpoints.

Put it together

Learning to write top-notch blog posts doesn’t happen overnight. Even if you’re already a good blogger, or a great one, you can always improve. Look at some of your older posts and think about what you’d do differently now. Read other blogs and make note of what works well and what doesn’t. Use those as clues for what to look for — and work on — in your own posts. Better writing means a better blog and better reader experience. Both you and your readers will benefit from that.

Further Reading

In Novel Editing, I talk about how I go about doing a first pass revision on a piece of fiction.

Editing and Proofreading Strategies is geared more to academic writing but still offers some excellent tips that can apply to bloggers as well. Do you even remember what a thesis statement is?

Ten Tips for Effective Editing gives some more advanced pointers and is a good resource, but I disagree with her opening statement, “Great writing probably requires genius.” Unless you define “genius” as hard work and persistence, of course.

This post is a contest entry for Daily Blog Tips.

Grammar Helper: Its vs It’s

I see these two words confused all the time, even though they’re very easy to get right.

It’s is a contraction for “it is” or even “it has.”

  • It’s been a long time since I’ve seen you. (It has…)
  • It’s a mistake to buy that property. (It is…)

Its is a pronoun that means something “belongs to it.”

  •  I wouldn’t buy that car; its paint job is awful.
  • The dog hurt its foot on its walk last night.

If you’re unsure, simply substitute “it is” or “it has” in the sentence to see which version of its/it’s you have. If the substitution works, then you want the version, it’s. If not, then you want its.

It’s simple, right?

DoshDosh on Megite

Dosh Dosh has a great article today on a community meme tracker, Megite. He talks about how joining such a community can improve your traffic. Also, it’s a great way to read blogs in your niche and get to know other bloggers.

Megite allows you to export the feeds that you read and publish them on Megite. It has an easy-to-use interface, so take a minute to look around the site and see if you think it’s for you. If you use other social networking sites like digg, delicious or technorati, then Megite will seem somewhat familiar.

Check out his community page here. If you’re not already reading some of these blogs, you should really consider it.

Writing Helper: Poor and Pour, Then and Than

Writers often confuse poor and pour, simply because they sound alike.

Poor means to lack money. It also means to elicit sympathy. Pour means to pour liquid.

Examples:

  • Poor Emily didn’t get the client.
  • Michael considers himself poor because he can’t sell his novel.
  • Pour me a cup of coffee, would you?

Many people confuse then and than in their writing. I think this is probably because they don’t make much of a distinction between the two in their speaking.

Then, refers to time. First one thing happened, and then another. Than, on the other hand, is used when making comparisons.

Examples:

  • I published my first novel and then quit my day job.
  • I would rather read horror than any other genre.

Try to avoid these common mistakes in your writing. Your editor will appreciate it!