Finding a Novel Idea

As we’re getting ready for Nano, the first step is to come up with an idea. I wrote a post about finding a novel idea the other day. Let’s explore idea generation a bit more before moving on to the outline.

You need to have a driving idea for the novel in order to move forward. Here are some examples…

A group of people face the end of the world — twice. After being mysteriously spared from a virulent plague, they must band together to save the world. Stephen King’s, The Stand.

A young man lives out the curse on his father because of his unusual pride. Tolkein’s, Children of Hurin.

A girl follows her father into Eastern Europe and discovers an ancient evil, and her long-lost mother. The Historian.

Of course, you can simplify any novel this way. If you were to take any of these ideas and write them yourself, it would be drastically different from the original (obviously!)

The gist is, you don’t have to come up with an “original” idea. Your execution, not your idea, is what will be original. Besides, you’d be hard pressed to come up with an idea that hasn’t been done in some form. I think writers tend to get bogged down in finding a perfect idea. Instead of focusing on that, take a good idea that you have and start working with it.

If you haven’t come up with your novel idea yet, try these tips.

  1. Carry a notebook for the next few days. Write down any conversation snippets, ideas, descriptions, etc. that come to mind. If you don’t have a notebook, fold up a couple sheets of paper and put them in your pocket.
  2. Go back through your old notes, short stories, abandoned novels, etc. for anything that might be resurrected or revamped.
  3. Jot down the plots for some of your favorite novels. Simplify them down to one sentence and think about how you might do it differently.
  4. Start with a character instead of a plot. Write down what she does during the day, what her goals are, etc. Think about how you’d approach a novel about this person.
  5. Stop stressing. Sometimes, the harder you try for an idea, the more elusive they are. Sit down and just start writing; you’d be surprised at what might come to you.

Next, we’ll start talking about outlining the novel.

Get Ready for NaNo!

Are you writing a novel this November? If you’re interested in participating in the National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), then that’s exactly what you’ll be doing.

Specifically, you’ll write 50,000 words (at least) on a novel that you haven’t already started. You can outline it beforehand, but not start writing until November 1.

This year will be my fourth, and I can tell you that it’s a challenge, and a blast!

If you’re planning on participating, then the first thing you’ll need is an idea. Over the next weeks, I’m planning a series of novel-building posts to help you ramp up for NaNo. I’ll be using the same ideas to get ready myself.

Where do you get your ideas?

Yep, a stereotypical question, but you have to get them somewhere. If you’ve been keeping an idea journal, then you have some material (maybe lots) to start with. If not, then now is a perfect time to start. Go through your journal and see if any ideas sound promising.

Another idea is to grab a general plot idea and start with it.

  • Two people fall in love who shouldn’t.
  • Someone gets murdered, kidnapped, raped, etc.
  • Someone discovers a something or some place.
  • A character goes through a life-altering discovery or change.
  • A marriage falls apart.
  • A person’s life falls apart.

You can turn any of these into any genre you like.

Another approach is to start with a character, instead of plot. Again, this all depends on your writing preference. I tend to do a bit of both, depending on the work. Think about who your main character will be and jot down some notes.

  • Describe your character’s physical characteristics
  • Describe your character’s personality
  • What does your character want? What does she fear? Frustrating these can make for good story lines.
  • See my character building worksheets for more exercises for developing your characters.

Post your NaNo ideas below.

Novel Excerpt

Here’s the example of the novel and how I’m doing the outlining that I promised. Of course, all standard copyright applies. Please feel free to link to it here, but please don’t copy it on your own site.

Novel excerpt

I used OpenOffice.org software to write the novel and do the table of contents, which is actually an outline for me. I can work from those notes as I’m doing the editing/rewriting that’s next in the process.

I used the following abbreviations and style formatting.

S: subject heading1

C: conflict heading2

N: notes heading3

E: ending heading4

You could, of course, add even more layers to the outline. If you prefer, you can even set Open Office to include the paragraph text in the table of contents/outline. I’m sure something similar is possible in Word, but I usually don’t use Word for anything more complicated than a simple document.

This is an extremely rough draft. One thing that jumps out at me is that. the scenes are far too short and choppy. Not all the characters are going to stick around until the end of the novel. Teresa and her story just dwindle away, so I’m probably going to remove her entirely. I’m also going to redo the ending.

By the way, these scenes were written last November as part of NaNoWriMo, so I’m not kidding when I say they’re rough!

I know that writing a novel, and editing a novel, are very personal tasks. I hope that something I’m doing might give you some ideas or come in handy in some way.

Prioritizing writing

I’ve been thinking a lot about writing, especially for those like me who write across different areas. It’s hard to balance fiction, blogging, and non-fiction. To make it more difficult, the writing I enjoy the least (non-fiction) is the only one that actually brings in any money. The blog actually costs me to host and to maintain the domain name.

My goal is to publish my fiction (and, presumably, make some money from that). I find it hard to balance my writing time. It’s easier, and sometimes more rewarding, to do a quick blog entry or article instead of slogging my way through editing the novel. I don’t want to sound like I don’t enjoy the novel, I do, but the novel certainly is more in the delayed gratification category.

What kinds of things do you do to balance your writing life? I’ve tossed some ideas out below. They’re things I’ve tried, and they might work for you.

1. Write first. This works relatively well for me. At the very least, I get some fiction writing time. On the downside, it makes working on the novel seem more a chore and less something to look forward to.

2. Set goals. This works a little better. I do NaNoWriMo every year, and the sheer audacity of it keeps me writing, and I’ve gotten two decent rough drafts in the bargain. I stumble when it comes to follow-through (editing).

3. Divide into small chunks. This works very well for me. I’ve managed to work my way through the editing of the novel so far by taking it one step at a time. I set a goal to work on 5-10 pages at a time, and I’m making steady progress.

4. Focus on one thing at a time. One thing I tend to do is get overwhelmed. I need to edit, proofread, check the timeline, check for inconsistencies, and it’s easy to feel that there’s so much to do it can never get done. I’ve focused this time on looking at each scene and how it fits into the plot overall. Does the scene work? Does it belong at all? Does it end well? Do I see any major inconsistencies? By focusing on the work as a whole and how each scene fits into it, I’ve been able to stay focused on the editing at hand and make progress.

5. No magic bullets. You may have a favorite way of editing, or a favorite piece of software you use. I’ve tried several different ones, and while some are pretty good, I haven’t found anything that doesn’t end up distracting me from the work at hand. I’m better off with my word processor.

On this editing pass, I’m making the following notes.

  • What is the subject of the scene? Very briefly describe what’s happening.
  • What is the major conflict? Is there one?
  • General notes (anything that I want to remember to check or change)
  • How does it end? Does the ending work? Should it be merged with another scene.

For example, notes from one of my scenes may look like this.

  • Summary: After a sermon, Fred returns to his dressing room to find his son, who has been dead two weeks, waiting.
  • Conflict: Major conflict is Fred trying to absorb the situation, trying to come to terms with what’s happening. Conflict is rather weak.
  • Notes: Scene is a bit short.
  • Ending: Ends with Fred realizing it’s not precisely Jeremy at all. Should the scene continue? Is the ending a cop-out?

I’ll post an example of my editing in the next day or two so you can see what kind of things I’m doing. Maybe it can save you some headaches.

Outlining with OpenOffice

I thought some of you might find my outlining technique interesting, or even useful. I use openoffice, which is a free office suite, similar to Microsoft’s. I really like it, and the word processor is terrific.

As you know, I’ve been outlining the novel, and I’m finding it much easier to do the outlining right in the text of the document. I put in four things at the top of each scene, much like you would a chapter heading. Each is prefaced by a letter to remind me what it is (in case I have a severe brain fart…)

S: summary of the scene

C: the major conflict in the scene (or lack thereof)

N: notes of things to fix, general impressions, etc.

E: how does the scene end, and whether it works

Each of these gets a heading 1, 2, 3, 4 style, respectively. To do that in OpenOffice, highlight the text you want to label, and then choose the style you want. That should already be in the menu bar at the top.

Next, create a table of contents (Insert > Indexes and Tables) at the very front of your document. On the first tab (Index/Table), you’ll click the button next to “additional styles” and arrange your headings as you want them to appear. I have mine indented much like you would for an outline.
Click okay, and the Table of contents should appear. Any time you want to update it, just right click in the table and select “update.”

One very cool thing you can do is put the body text into the table of contents too (using the “additional styles” button).

Finally, to get the table of contents converted to something editable, copy and paste it out to a new document. You’ll keep the formatting, but it will no longer be attached to the document.

So far, it’s working well for me. I haven’t tried this in MS Word, but you can probably do something similar there as well. I’m not sure though that Word will let you put the body text in a table of contents though.

I’m off to keep on editing. I have another short story stirring around that I’m planning on putting on the site as a pdf. No promises on when that will happen, but I’m working on it.

Writing Resolutions

Did you make any? I’m not much of a resolution person; as soon as I make one, it’s practically broken anyway, so there doesn’t seem to be much point.

What I have decided to do is this, concentrate on turning a profit from my writing this year. In 2006 I did make some money, but not enough to cover web hosting fees, supplies, research materials, etc. I figure I may have come close to breaking even, maybe.

If you’re like me, then you also may be wondering how to make some, or more, money from your writing in 2007. Maybe you want a little bit of a second income, or maybe you want to go all the way and support yourself from your writing. I’d be in the second camp. Although I might not choose to leave work (I really enjoy my day job), I’d love to make enough from my writing so I could leave if I wanted to.

As a part of this plan, I’m working on finishing and editing The Resurrected. I’m very strongly leaning toward a print on demand publisher, but I haven’t chosen one yet. Over the next few weeks, I’ll be doing some research and letting everyone here in on what I find.

What is your writing goal, or resolution, for the upcoming year? Care to share what your plan is to achieve it?

Meeting a Writing Deadline

Well, NaNoWriMo ends this evening, and as you can see, I hit 50,000 words last night.

Whew.

I had to do quite a bit of rushing and writing in order to make up lost ground and finish on time, which got me to thinking about writing deadlines in general and techniques for meeting them. Here are a few I used to finish this year.

  1. When you’re tired, frustrated, or tempted to quit for any reason, force yourself to write for five more minutes. If nothing else, you get five minutes’ worth of work. Usually, and even better, you work through the frustrating bit and get back into the work. Continue reading

Ramble, ramble, ramble

Well, I’m making progress on the NaNo novel. As you can see in the chart below, I’m still painfully behind, but I am catching up. That’s something, isn’t it?

I thought it might be useful to talk about how I’ve approached this year’s NaNo, and how it’s working. For those of you already well underway, I know it’s too late to change course, but this may be useful for your general noveling pleasure. Continue reading

Links, links, and zooming right along

Here are a few links you might find useful.

New Novelist This software looks interesting, maybe. The screenshots aren’t very good, so it’s difficult to tell much about it. Unfortunately, I wasn’t able to find a place to download a free trial.

Story Mind They offer some free articles and classes, but also free trial downloads of several writing program. If you’ve been thinking of buying something, you might find a trial version here. Continue reading

Progress

Yes, I’m roughly 2000 words behind where I wanted to be by this point, but I did spend a good amount of time yesterday planning and outlining, so it’s not as bad as it might seem. Expect another word count update tomorrow morning; I’m rising and shining and getting my butt in gear first thing.

We were supposed to head out of town this weekend, but it turns out that hubby is on call. That’s okay, it’ll give me a change to write and get some much needed girl time between me and my mom.

Stay tuned, I’m putting together some links on outlining and planning a novel that I hope to get posted within the next few days. Keep writing!!